In our class we have been getting into myths and legends and so we stumbled into The legend of King Midas and his golden touch.But we mixed it up a little so we write a story about a chocolate touch instead of gold.Our story had to include a plot personality and characteristics.
If I could have improved in anything please leave a comment?
Kia ora Kingston My name is Kayden from Paihia School I really like your blog post about Chocolate TOUCH. I like how you have explained about the guy touching every thing and it turn to Chocolate I really enjoyed reading this story. My favorite part of this story was when John got weird after eating a cookie. What made you think of this blog post? Can’t wait to read more.
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Kingston my name is Timuaki from gisborne intermediate I really like the way he rose to fame and how you explained it.
ReplyDeleteNext time maybe you could make it shorter. If you want to see my work my blog is https://gisinttimuakis.blogspot.com/